Hilarious comic. xD Anyway, the design just looks a bit different, but hey, every artist has their style. It looks kind of like the show, though. I like the neat lines and everything else looks fair. But I agree, the punchline kind of jumps in your face fast, and the color of the font is kind of difficult to distinguish. The last panel is a bit too big, but that's fine. Everything else is splendid. The plot of this comic is absolutely humorous and I have never seen a joke like this before.
Celestia: *On the phone* what's that... I can only teach ONE Unicorn....? But I wanted to teach Trixie AND Twilight... sigh... fine... Twilight: One Unicorn....? *Grabs the ball* Twilight: *Whispers* will it be me? *Shakes it* Pool Ball: "Don't count on it" Twilight: 'DON'T COUNT ON IT'!? (First person to get the reference earns a cookie)