Well, this is my first critique, so I doubt 90% of you guys will ignore this. Anyway, here's what I have to say. The comic is really well drawn, the outline and colours and all. It has originality too. One of the most hilarious Trollestia comics I have ever read! The technique is good too. Of course, the ponies are really cute!!!!!!! It really has a great impact on people after they read this. Reminding themselves not to fall for a trick that others say that your water is poisoned and you are going to die and all. Oh Trollestia.... I'm done here. Crappy critique by the way....
First of all, I am an unproffesional critic... but oh well!
The expressions were shown clearly. The words were easy to understand... so it has a very clear story in it. Twilight was very cute. I loved the details! I liked how some water spilled out of the bottle when Twi fell, er.. ran away? The only part that wasn't clear was if Twilight was falling or running away- I honestly couldn't tell. The comic overall was really nice! I love Trollestia! Keep being awesome!
~ XxQueenOfPiexX❤ PS la la la la la la la la la la la la lol