Well, this is my first critique, so I doubt 90% of you guys will ignore this. Anyway, here's what I have to say. The comic is really well drawn, the outline and colours and all. It has originality too. One of the most hilarious Trollestia comics I have ever read! The technique is good too. Of course, the ponies are really cute!!!!!!! It really has a great impact on people after they read this. Reminding themselves not to fall for a trick that others say that your water is poisoned and you are going to die and all. Oh Trollestia.... I'm done here. Crappy critique by the way....
First of all, I am an unproffesional critic... but oh well!
The expressions were shown clearly. The words were easy to understand... so it has a very clear story in it. Twilight was very cute. I loved the details! I liked how some water spilled out of the bottle when Twi fell, er.. ran away? The only part that wasn't clear was if Twilight was falling or running away- I honestly couldn't tell. The comic overall was really nice! I love Trollestia! Keep being awesome!
~ XxQueenOfPiexX❤ PS la la la la la la la la la la la la lol
Raven: Luna and Celestia can live forever, yes. Cadance, not proven yet. Even if she can, just because their lifespans are endless doesn't mean they can't get killed. All creatures die in the end. Celestia and Luna will die eventually. Ain't that right, Grim?