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:iconberrypunchplz::iconsaysplz:"Less talking, more drinking!"

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PONIES = Hasbro (C) and Hub (C)
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:iconinciatus:
This is quite an adorable comic and I enjoyed reading it. The lines and shapes are well done and I don't see any fault. The facial expressions are adorable and for the most part fit well. The background is fine and doesn't detract from the comic.

In the first panel it looks a little weird because it doesn't really look like they are looking at each other. Berry seems to be staring at something to the right of me while Thunderlane seems to be avoiding eye contact.

The font is a little hard to read because it gets so close together with the black outline. Thunderlane's words especially can be hard to read.

The only other thing, and it might just be because I have a mild color deficiency, is that Berry's tongue looks to be the same color as her coat. She looks really weird in the third panel because of this.

Nicely done,
Inciatus
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:icondrwhofan611:
DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lighting Storm (correct me, I'm guessing at his name): *wheezing* *talks with weak voce* y-...*wheeze* y-...*wheeze* c-c-.... *wheeze* chocking me....
Berry Punch: Quite your talking, and drink a lot of that with me!!!

~All My Best
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:iconcalypso399:
Calypso399 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
His name is thunder lane
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:iconrainbowdash-rainboom:
RainbowDash-Rainboom Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student General Artist
berry punch has been found out to be a drinking pony
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:iconinvaderpucca:
InvaderPucca Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Who?
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wait... what??!! 
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:iconthegtbx:
TheGTBX Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Boost!
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:iconsarasword:
SaraSword Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O_O
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:iconkingflurry:
KingFlurry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Ahahah,spotted the father!By th e way,I love the entire comic and above all the expressions and the funny style.
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:icontwilalullamoon:
TwilaLullamoon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What? WHAT? WHAT HAE YOU DOONE, THUNDERLAAAAANE!?
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:iconsweetymimy22:
sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
hahahahaha oh man ber
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:iconkvticpony1:
Kvticpony1 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Professional Artist
Lol Star! Star! Star! Star! Star! 
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:icongray-chaser:
Gray-Chaser Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha LOL u wanna drink more?! XD
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:iconjustdoitmarshall:
JustDoItMarshall Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"I have a souvenir- a daughter." Gold.
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:iconjazzylick:
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
DAT WATCH
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:icontwilalullamoon:
TwilaLullamoon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Best

Watch

EVER
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:iconjazzylick:
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
I WANT WUNNA DEM WATCHESES
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:icontwilalullamoon:
TwilaLullamoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hehe. X3
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:iconmegacashgirl:
MegaCashGirl Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
-looks at my little BerryGreen figure on the shelf- ummmmmm
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:iconscarecrow113:
Scarecrow113 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"I have a souvenir- a daughter" I faved just for that line
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:iconcaptainprower:
CaptainPrower Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
SHOULD'VE USED PROTECTION THERE, THUNDERLANE.
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:iconfredan92:
FreDaN92 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
Sigh know that feeling, I have an unhealthy adiction to coke...
the drink not the drug
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:iconschwarzerritter:
SchwarzerRitter Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
As if there is any difference.
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:iconxxdarkbrony12xx:
xxdarkbrony12xx Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
see this why you dont get drunk at a party
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:iconbrutalityinc:
BrutalityInc Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Thunderlane - irresponsible cad. Berry - irresponsible drunk.

It's a good match. 
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:iconcgregor7524:
cgregor7524 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
why does everyone always make berry punch an alcoholic??
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:iconnamless-entity:
Namless-entity Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Because this is the internet
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:iconbanjo289:
banjo289 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
and derpy loving muffins and lyra loving humans? it's cute and funny until you realize it's not canon in the show.
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:icontruffulacheese989:
truffulacheese989 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconderpyshrugplz:
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:iconchibdogg:
Chibdogg Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
...hilarious
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:icondmr131313:
dmr131313 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
poor jack
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:iconnightkit123:
NightKit123 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm GOING TO CRY!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
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:icontb2374:
TB2374 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Professional Artist
you never EVER say the "W" word in front of Berry.
EVER.
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:icondemonfreeze:
DemonFreeze Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Is Jack's last name Daniels? ;P
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Most likely. :)
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:iconcharlesthecomicartis:
CharlestheComicArtis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fuck
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:iconcharlesthecomicartis:
CharlestheComicArtis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
insert:thatescalatedquiclkyplz
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:iconneedthistool:
needthistool Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
So many semi-canonical single moms....
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Well, there seem to be quite alot more mares than stallions in the MLP universe. This is probably why there are so many harem and girl/girl ship-fics.
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:icongym356:
gym356 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
i feel like turning to berry sometimes
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:iconepulson:
Epulson Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Replace drinks, then. Start drinking moccha. Now you're covered. Mission accomplished and +250 EXP.
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:icondarksniperknight:
DarkSniperKnight Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Berry Punch is my favorite drinking buddy... When she doesnt steal my wine!
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:iconjetjk3:
JETJK3 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Sonic: If I could run away I would never stop running
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:iconhaissan:
Haissan Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Pinot noir
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:icondovyzz:
dovyzz Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Well that escalated quickly.
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:iconpinkieshyfim:
PinkieShyFIM Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, Berry, always drinking!! :D
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:iconomeggga:
omeggga Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
says the party pony...
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:iconmorfonious:
Morfonious Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Thunderlane is actually her daughter's father! The third panel confirms it.
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:iconxd190:
XD190 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so wait... back on that military reserve they both.... hmm... i could use some wine right now myself.
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