Magic duel: Secret files

While I found this comic to be highly entertaining to myself, I did notice things that bothered me. While to other viewers of this amazing artwork, I do not like that it goes from a black and white set comic to a full on coloured comic as it made me feel a lack of consistency within the comic. The change to coloured made the look appear not as well drawn as the black and white versions made it look much better. The originality of this was quite high as I liked how you used something we're all aware of and made into something that may have never been expected! This, I loved. The final impact did give me a shock, and yet a laugh at the same time, initially but, nether the less was quite an effective impact on the viewer. What I find to be weird is that in the frame just before the last, you see Twilight as the "rear end" of Trixie, but you do not see even a hint of Trixie's cutie mark unlike the final frame in which it shows off the cutie mark on Twilight. The drawings were perfect and it gave us viewers a real sense of all emotions going on during the whole comic. Amazing work from what appears to be a simple, yet effective, idea.

Overall, I would say that this is a well thought out, well-drawn, very effective idea you have running. While there were imperfections with this, I would still say that it was quite a good comic. Improvements could include perhaps a sense of consistency within the comics. A lot of it, I found to be just fine .

(Final thought: It was never explained how Twilight got what looks like to be a dragon-like hand (based on the look of Spike), but either way, still good.)

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