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Magic Duel: Secret Files by Epulson Magic Duel: Secret Files by Epulson
:icontrixiescoffplz::iconsaysplz: "Behave! Next time don't replace Trixie's bum, so she won't you call one!"

I did first part sketchy, because Trixie was telling story, and you can never remember EVERYTHING from your memory, in smallest, sharp details. Try yourself.

Currahee! - Twilight was the only unicorn in Airborne Division of Equestria Army, so deal with it.

Happy New Year, folks! Remember to detox yourselves firsthand, before you start drawing anything!

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PONIES = Hasbro (C) and Hub (C)
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While I found this comic to be highly entertaining to myself, I did notice things that bothered me. While to other viewers of this amazing artwork, I do not like that it goes from a black and white set comic to a full on coloured comic as it made me feel a lack of consistency within the comic. The change to coloured made the look appear not as well drawn as the black and white versions made it look much better. The originality of this was quite high as I liked how you used something we're all aware of and made into something that may have never been expected! This, I loved. The final impact did give me a shock, and yet a laugh at the same time, initially but, nether the less was quite an effective impact on the viewer. What I find to be weird is that in the frame just before the last, you see Twilight as the "rear end" of Trixie, but you do not see even a hint of Trixie's cutie mark unlike the final frame in which it shows off the cutie mark on Twilight. The drawings were perfect and it gave us viewers a real sense of all emotions going on during the whole comic. Amazing work from what appears to be a simple, yet effective, idea.

Overall, I would say that this is a well thought out, well-drawn, very effective idea you have running. While there were imperfections with this, I would still say that it was quite a good comic. Improvements could include perhaps a sense of consistency within the comics. A lot of it, I found to be just fine .

(Final thought: It was never explained how Twilight got what looks like to be a dragon-like hand (based on the look of Spike), but either way, still good.)

-LifeUpStudios
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dipsydew Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
The claw hoof at the end was a bit jarring, but everything else flowed fine.
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LeonLowell Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wait, how did she get those fingers? 
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Scyphi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is now bringing up in my head certain anatomical issues I'm not sure I even want addressed... :P
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UltraTheHedgetoaster Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, I can see Trixie doing that. Though if it's popularity she wanted, I figure there'd be somepony else far better suited for the task. :P

Fused together - The Derp and Muffinfull Trixie by UltraTheHedgetoaster
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MadnessAbe Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's CatDog all over again! 
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AnnieRoshino Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it but i wonder why you separated them by a line if they are joined together, anyway great work!! Even if i also don't know why this happened XD
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XD190 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh Currahee. i still miss Malarky and Garneer in that show.. BUT WAIT! dont you have to be a pegisus for the equestrian airborne division?
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Epulson Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, they're accepting anyone. Of course mortality rate of cadets is rather high, but ponies comes from cotton candy vats, in high number, so it's okay... I guess.
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XD190 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
but what if war breaks out in Equestria? you know, a bunch of pony's dissatisfied with the imperial monarchy an cause civil war? (at least thats what ill answer with this upcoming game me and parajason are working on.)
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W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
trixie always wins!!
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