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:icontrixiescoffplz::iconsaysplz: "Behave! Next time don't replace Trixie's bum, so she won't you call one!"

I did first part sketchy, because Trixie was telling story, and you can never remember EVERYTHING from your memory, in smallest, sharp details. Try yourself.

Currahee! - Twilight was the only unicorn in Airborne Division of Equestria Army, so deal with it.

Happy New Year, folks! Remember to detox yourselves firsthand, before you start drawing anything!

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PONIES = Hasbro (C) and Hub (C)
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While I found this comic to be highly entertaining to myself, I did notice things that bothered me. While to other viewers of this amazing artwork, I do not like that it goes from a black and white set comic to a full on coloured comic as it made me feel a lack of consistency within the comic. The change to coloured made the look appear not as well drawn as the black and white versions made it look much better. The originality of this was quite high as I liked how you used something we're all aware of and made into something that may have never been expected! This, I loved. The final impact did give me a shock, and yet a laugh at the same time, initially but, nether the less was quite an effective impact on the viewer. What I find to be weird is that in the frame just before the last, you see Twilight as the "rear end" of Trixie, but you do not see even a hint of Trixie's cutie mark unlike the final frame in which it shows off the cutie mark on Twilight. The drawings were perfect and it gave us viewers a real sense of all emotions going on during the whole comic. Amazing work from what appears to be a simple, yet effective, idea.

Overall, I would say that this is a well thought out, well-drawn, very effective idea you have running. While there were imperfections with this, I would still say that it was quite a good comic. Improvements could include perhaps a sense of consistency within the comics. A lot of it, I found to be just fine .

(Final thought: It was never explained how Twilight got what looks like to be a dragon-like hand (based on the look of Spike), but either way, still good.)

-LifeUpStudios
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DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lyra: HAAAAAH!!!! WHERE DID YOU GET THOSE FINGERS!?
Settle down.... settle down... great, why did you even ADD those fingers anyway?

~All My Best
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dipsydew Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
The claw hoof at the end was a bit jarring, but everything else flowed fine.
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LeonLowell Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wait, how did she get those fingers? 
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:iconscyphi:
Scyphi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is now bringing up in my head certain anatomical issues I'm not sure I even want addressed... :P
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UltraTheHedgetoaster Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, I can see Trixie doing that. Though if it's popularity she wanted, I figure there'd be somepony else far better suited for the task. :P

Fused together - The Derp and Muffinfull Trixie by UltraTheHedgetoaster
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MadnessAbe Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's CatDog all over again! 
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AnnieRoshino Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it but i wonder why you separated them by a line if they are joined together, anyway great work!! Even if i also don't know why this happened XD
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XD190 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh Currahee. i still miss Malarky and Garneer in that show.. BUT WAIT! dont you have to be a pegisus for the equestrian airborne division?
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Epulson Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, they're accepting anyone. Of course mortality rate of cadets is rather high, but ponies comes from cotton candy vats, in high number, so it's okay... I guess.
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XD190 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
but what if war breaks out in Equestria? you know, a bunch of pony's dissatisfied with the imperial monarchy an cause civil war? (at least thats what ill answer with this upcoming game me and parajason are working on.)
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W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
trixie always wins!!
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ARMYTR00PER Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Currahee!!
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superpika293 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SOOOooo... why does she have hands and how Trixie, you know, go to the bathroom?
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:iconultrathehedgetoaster:
UltraTheHedgetoaster Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Magic. :iconrimshotplz:
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:iconsuperpika293:
superpika293 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd prefer science...
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:iconlunacanada:
lunacanada Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't stop laughing
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BerryPAWNCH Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
I...shudder to think how Trixie goes poopie. D:

Very nice work! I think eventually Twilight may completely take on Trixie's color scheme in time, though like many I wonder where Twilight's dragon hands came from...maybe Trixie was part griffon all this time? :D
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Epulson Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Trixie originally was a living liquid, but now she mutated with smartest ass in the whole Equestria. And everything is under control - Trixie's know how to keep living with it, he, he.
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BerryPAWNCH Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
So a Twilight ass has pretty much made her even more god-tier, I gather. :3

Trixie used to be a living liquid? I had no idea! Then again, I'm always the last to know.
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angelofrombelow Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Twilight, you did not think that one through.
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:iconcaptain-brony:
Captain-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Catdog, CATDOG, alone in the world is a little catdog
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:iconmatt0044:
matt0044 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Reminds me of CatDog.
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:iconfanwriter:
fanwriter Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Reminds me of CatDog :)
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:iconackej96:
ackej96 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Dat Ass
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:iconblazinjake:
Blazinjake Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
being trixie's ass for a week=claws instead of hooves?
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
FUNKY!!!
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:iconhappymcdull:
HappyMcDull Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
o_0
the heck did you do?
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:iconmizurino1:
Mizurino1 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
...how did twilight get hands?
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:iconkitmaro:
Kitmaro Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
.....How do they use the restroom?
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:iconangelofrombelow:
angelofrombelow Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Well, Trixie always used to talk shit and now she... you get the picture.
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:iconbonesatellite:
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Of course Trixie would find a way to turn even the strangest of situations to her own advantage. :)
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:iconzuzasek:
zuzasek Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
czemu angielski komiks znajduje się w galerii polskiej grupy? :d
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Epulson Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's interesting, isn't it? Then why you're commenting in polish language, instead of english, under it? Właściwie sam nie wiem, ale jest zwała, no nie? :giggle:
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HereticCZ Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Am I the only one who feels a bit...uneasy? Your comics always turn in...unexpected ways. You know that? But your style is gradually improving.
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Epulson Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much, bro. I didn't noticed that my comics are rather random. I see a sense in them, but I guess it's visible only to me. So yes - they are random. I'm working on bringing in some consistency to them, but it's going to be a rough ride, he, he.
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HereticCZ Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Pardon me, maybe I wrote it in wrong way :) I meant it like random themes but every comic gives perfect sense and even better point! I find them very funny with great sense for art :)
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HighRollerHydra Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
...wow, going to the bathroom's gonna be PRET-TY awkward.
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:iconhereticcz:
HereticCZ Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Have you seen Futurama? xD
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cormy1 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
... Trixie's bum has claws.
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:iconjediswordzam:
JediSwordZAM Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... dafug?
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
rofl she so mad
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:iconsilentcarto:
SilentCarto Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
._. wat.
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:iconaqomxg:
AqomXG Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
What the heck...O_o
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:iconraenboow:
RaenBoow Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Original! :D I like it! Continue on this! Make a tumblr! XD
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:iconselvokaz:
selvokaz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Which end spews more dung?
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
lol weird but funny
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:iconeligeti:
eligeti Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Filmographer
puke!
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templar127 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
:iconepicfacehoofplz::iconthinksplz:STUPID TWILIGHT!
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:iconvalach:
Valach Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
why suddenly with a hand?
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Moelogroc Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Probably learned it from those pets at the Pet Shop. They have human-y hands when they need to make gestures.

Alternately? It's magic, we don't have to explain it.
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