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Spike, do you ever lift?

COLLABORATION CREDITS: ~FatalNatal + *CzudakX

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PONIEZ = Hasbro (C) and Hub (C)
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:iconcatofthewilderness:
This looks great. But a few things are, I noticed that Rarity's mane is flying up straightly, but her tail is still curly. And ponies in youth have their horns with a curved point, not a sharp one. And in the last panel, I noticed that Rarity's left foreleg is positioned oddly. So is spikes legs. As you can see, his rear leg (the leg closest to her tail) is hanging off the edge of her flank (sorry if this sounds wrong) but the toes are still straight as if he is standing on a flat surface. And on all the panels, Spike's eye colour is not shown, as it is always.
What do you think?
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:iconemliminator:
EmLiminator Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor rarity
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:icondrwhofan611:
DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Couldn't he just do that with Rainbow Dash? xD ~All My Best
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:icongumballkitty:
gumballkitty Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Well that went differently then expected
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:iconultrathehedgetoaster:
UltraTheHedgetoaster Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Tsk, tsk. Silly Spike. :roll:

Everyone knows that Fluttershy is best surfboard!
Fluttersurf by vapgames
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:iconaskthegamerassassin:
AskTheGamerAssassin Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
i thought umm...
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:icongumballcariedarwin:
gumballcariedarwin Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
misleading!! :)
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:iconxxl0vergirlxx:
XxL0verGirlxX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
I thought he was going um yeah
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:iconflutterbatismagic:
FlutterbatIsMagic Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...oh boy!  I um, thought...

:iconrainbowdashrapeplz:
:iconfluttershyrapeplz:
:iconapplejackrapefaceplz:
:iconpinkiepieplz:
:iconrarityplz:

:icontwilightsparkleplz: :iconsaysplz: Really?
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:iconsupadude20:
supadude20 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
At first it was like:
SHIPIN IT LIEK FEDEX

And then it was like:
To bad they BOTH survive this
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:iconsnapcentino:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Professional Writer
Gorramit, Spike.
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:iconmiko773:
Miko773 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
.........................
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:iconthegentlemancupcake:
TheGentlemanCupcake Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey there :3
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:iconmiko773:
Miko773 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconxv22shasokais:
xv22shasokais Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Somehow I expected that.
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:iconcupcakecrazy43:
CupcakeCrazy43 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Rarity...did it ever occur to you that you have magic powers? DUH LOL
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:iconraizerninja:
RaizerNinja Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
Died laughing
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:iconredholm:
Redholm Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
And they died splatting=)
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:iconawesomecraft124:
awesomecraft124 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
HA
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:iconmegawubs12:
megawubs12 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
LOL!
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:iconmalemlp:
malemlp Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
lol !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
If Spike and Rarity are going to die, they will die with style!
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This gives "falling with style" a whole new meaning. :)
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
of course :)
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:iconelementof-loyalty:
ElementOf-Loyalty Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww Spike,you SUCK!
Rarity's cuteness jumped eight stories high in this comic,bravo.
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PinkieShyFIM Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My critique: it has MLP, with spike and rarity, and has a twist.
DA' END!
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:iconsigmas-18:
sigmas-18 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Spike has his priority's straight
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:iconnarwhal-wants-a-hug:
Narwhal-Wants-A-Hug Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspikethedragon:
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:iconnarwhal-wants-a-hug:
Narwhal-Wants-A-Hug Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
umm.... not expected on last panel :meow: i like because
:bulletpink: It has MLP FiM in it :meow:
:bulletpurple: it has rarity
:bulletred: it has spike
THE END
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:iconwait0wat:
Wait0wat Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
At first I was like: AAAAAAAWWWWWW YY-
Then I saw the last panal: -Sh!t.
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:iconmarihikari:
marihikari Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
LOL XD. That was unexpected!
Nice job, it's a cute comic.
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:icontapionvirgo:
TapionVirgo Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
I wonder what happen later, when they get rescued :D
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:iconbronybyexception:
bronybyexception Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
ultimate last moments
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:iconsmokerlongbottom:
SmokerLongbottom Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Fallen from the chair......again.
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:iconepulson:
Epulson Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why, thank you lady. :)
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:iconsmokerlongbottom:
SmokerLongbottom Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:handshake:
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:iconhetalia5:
hetalia5 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
ha.that didn't work.
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:iconhetalia5:
hetalia5 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
:iconspikethedragonplz:
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:iconlelvigen:
lelvigen Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Spike is a jerk.
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:icondarthgojira:
DarthGojira Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Now they're going to boff in the air/
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:iconchrismilesprower:
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
LOL
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:iconvvolfeh:
vvolfeh Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Artist
i thought they were gonna kiss :iconsmoochplz:
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:iconseelkrage:
Seelkrage Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
me and you think very different, my dear friend.
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:iconponiaczkapl:
PoniaczkaPL Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
:iconspikeplz:
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:iconthenerdypony:
TheNerdyPony Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I did that too when I first tried =3 type
:icon spikethedragon: instead.
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:iconthenerdypony:
TheNerdyPony Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
with a plz of course.
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Like a boss.
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:iconjustherefortheponehs:
Well what else could he have wanted to do in that situation ;)

Very funny. Nice job.
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:iconpurplegill10:
Purplegill10 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
"Spike, do you ever lift?" XD
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:icontimmcjimfrompl:
TimMcJimFromPl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Zabawne.
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:iconnecronosisthewolf:
necronosisthewolf Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
ssss i couldnt help but LAUGH omg spiiike im sure this isnt what rarity thought would happen but lol spike!
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