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Bad day for Bon-Bon by Epulson Bad day for Bon-Bon by Epulson
Lyra leveled up and gained in some new spells. Bon Bon disapprove. I discovered that my gallery lacks of Lyra with her 'human' obsession and for every artist out there - it's a 'must have', literally. Changed that.

:iconhappylyraplz::iconsaysplz:"Oooh! And I also learnt one called 'Liquidification'! Cool, huh?

:iconbonbonponyplz::iconsaysplz:"..."

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PONIES = Hasbro (C) and Hub (C)
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While I am not particularly a fan of the fanon interpretation of Lyra being obsessed with sea ponies and hands, you have managed to slip past that barrier with an excellently pieced comic. While this is a compilation of overused jokes, you are able to add a new angle to it, thus avoiding the "this is just the same old, same old."

Your facial expressions are fantastic!

This may seem nit-picky, but you may wish to reexamine the size of Lyra's horn between each panel, as it seems to fluctuate a little.

I... I have nothing else. Congrats! Aside from Originality, you got me!
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First off: I love it! :D Good work!

The whole thing feels much too cluttered. It is a tad overwhelming to have the characters so close. Zoom out about 10-20%, so we could see about a head's worth more to the left and right.
Bon Bon's reactions seem a bit too exaggerated. [In the first frame, I would have just had bon bon sigh (~sigh or *sigh*) Cursing seems a bit extreme. Or you could have left it out. I feel the last frame, I would have just had bon bon do a face-fin, and have a 'sizzle' over her head, showing her annoyance. Or, if you got rid of the thought bubble, the comic would be fine. ]
[I personally would have had bon bon in a kiddie pool or the likes - floating in a magical bubble seems a tad overkill... Most unicorns don't seem to be able to do that. ]
In general, it seems like you are overexplaining things. It would look much more streamlined and professional if you simplified it. Leave more to assumption. You don't have to fully write out each thought. You make the expressions clear enough that you don't need to add their thoughts.

Good work! :D Keep it up!
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PsychopathGod1984 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Cute!
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EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Hilarious, especially because it's usually Lyra who gets drawn as a sea pony. Looks like there will so be vengeance later. Watch your back, Lyra!

As for the lack of Lyra's "human obsession" based on the few seconds of her sitting oddly that  one time years ago... don't sweat it. The "humans" thing gets so very incredibly old when it's all you ever see of her. It was funny years ago but by the ten trillionth time... meh. 
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malis22 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
something seems fishy
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Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
This is a good comic, but on thing has me confused, where did the shoo be doo thing come from? I've seen and heard it a bit but I have no Idea where it came from. It doesn't take away from the joke but It still confuses me...
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Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Ooooh... Okay.
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flygon7777 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
haha... Yeah, it's pretty stupid, but what else would you expect :T
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ScarletandLunaRcool Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconbonbonponyplz: :iconsaysplz: lyra..... do you know how to change me back?!?!
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Rainbow-Gale Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
If she's singing that in the last panel why you got it in a thought bubble?
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