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Bad day for Bon-Bon by Epulson Bad day for Bon-Bon by Epulson
Lyra leveled up and gained in some new spells. Bon Bon disapprove. I discovered that my gallery lacks of Lyra with her 'human' obsession and for every artist out there - it's a 'must have', literally. Changed that.

:iconhappylyraplz::iconsaysplz:"Oooh! And I also learnt one called 'Liquidification'! Cool, huh?

:iconbonbonponyplz::iconsaysplz:"..."

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While I am not particularly a fan of the fanon interpretation of Lyra being obsessed with sea ponies and hands, you have managed to slip past that barrier with an excellently pieced comic. While this is a compilation of overused jokes, you are able to add a new angle to it, thus avoiding the "this is just the same old, same old."

Your facial expressions are fantastic!

This may seem nit-picky, but you may wish to reexamine the size of Lyra's horn between each panel, as it seems to fluctuate a little.

I... I have nothing else. Congrats! Aside from Originality, you got me!
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First off: I love it! :D Good work!

The whole thing feels much too cluttered. It is a tad overwhelming to have the characters so close. Zoom out about 10-20%, so we could see about a head's worth more to the left and right.
Bon Bon's reactions seem a bit too exaggerated. [In the first frame, I would have just had bon bon sigh (~sigh or *sigh*) Cursing seems a bit extreme. Or you could have left it out. I feel the last frame, I would have just had bon bon do a face-fin, and have a 'sizzle' over her head, showing her annoyance. Or, if you got rid of the thought bubble, the comic would be fine. ]
[I personally would have had bon bon in a kiddie pool or the likes - floating in a magical bubble seems a tad overkill... Most unicorns don't seem to be able to do that. ]
In general, it seems like you are overexplaining things. It would look much more streamlined and professional if you simplified it. Leave more to assumption. You don't have to fully write out each thought. You make the expressions clear enough that you don't need to add their thoughts.

Good work! :D Keep it up!
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DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
..... shoo-bee-doo-shoo-bee-DOO!!!!
(Lyra looked adorable in the first panel, by the way)

~All My Best
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PsychopathGod1984 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Cute!
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EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Hilarious, especially because it's usually Lyra who gets drawn as a sea pony. Looks like there will so be vengeance later. Watch your back, Lyra!

As for the lack of Lyra's "human obsession" based on the few seconds of her sitting oddly that  one time years ago... don't sweat it. The "humans" thing gets so very incredibly old when it's all you ever see of her. It was funny years ago but by the ten trillionth time... meh. 
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malis22 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
something seems fishy
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Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
This is a good comic, but on thing has me confused, where did the shoo be doo thing come from? I've seen and heard it a bit but I have no Idea where it came from. It doesn't take away from the joke but It still confuses me...
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Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Ooooh... Okay.
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flygon7777 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
haha... Yeah, it's pretty stupid, but what else would you expect :T
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ScarletandLunaRcool Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconbonbonponyplz: :iconsaysplz: lyra..... do you know how to change me back?!?!
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Rainbow-Gale Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
If she's singing that in the last panel why you got it in a thought bubble?
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:iconrecoyote:
RECoyote Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
That could be the best pony song ever
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DJMUSICPLAYER Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional Artist
bon bon looks cute in the end :3
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assainwolf9 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student General Artist
lol
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Cute! :D
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gym356 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
lol so cute makes me feel happy these are reasons i love mlp
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:iconepulson:
Epulson Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's great. Be welcomed with prismatic power of colorful & pastel mini horses! :meow:
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VampiricLemur Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
so what happened here...?
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ihategeorgethetree Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconstewieplz::iconsaysplz: I LOVE REPITITION!
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aurora-celest Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
In case anypony's wondering, this [link] is the song Czudax is referring to.
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southpony98 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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Siarnaq21 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha. Aha. Ahaha... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!


That one episode of Teen Titans.
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:iconbanjo289:
banjo289 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
which one? i haven't seen that show in a while..
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:iconsiarnaq21:
Siarnaq21 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The one with the alien dog that they thought was Beast Boy, and the manchild alien, Soto.
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banjo289 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
i remember that! no matter how much i hated that episode, this made it funny!
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J82 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Bon-Bon's Face in the final pannal just keeps getting funnier every time I read this.
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Ditzydoo2424 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Can someone tell me how we found out about lyra's obsession?
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:iconepulson:
Epulson Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's just one of many things with which fandoms came up. She was sitting like human in sixth episode and everyone assumed she's into humans.
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thedifferentguy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In a newer episode I think she was holding a soda like a human being
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Ditzydoo2424 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Aaaah thanks for that.
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ZDForrest Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, Lyra!
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   General Artist
Oh noes, sea pony! XD
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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18273 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
shoooobeee doooo seaponymating call activate !
shoob shoob beee dooooo
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KaedeShinomori Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
The song Bon Bon is humming...that's nightmare stuff, I tell ya.
Great job!
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Holhander Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
this is what happens when you let a mage level up,they get more spells...
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mercenario1945 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
WHAT .-.
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crazyseandx Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
3rd panel reaction: AAAAAAAAAnnnnnnnndddd she broke BonBon. BonBon has officially lost her marbles. And it almost reminds me of certain things I've viewed/read that originate from Japan in anime/manga form.
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nialleririshgirl Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lyra is just like a little filly good job and it is very cute
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CHARLIE6500 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Moar!
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ThomasKimbler Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
You're art style has no words sir... I strive to be of this caliber...
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angelofrombelow Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Yeah... never let fanon Lyra get hold of the alicorn amulet. The show would be ruined forever.
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W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
rofl
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Nate6595 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
I don't understand
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Clutchmsilvap Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
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MegaPatron Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
loL! XD
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Geechan1 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Dat anger face...
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MalphLink Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Sea ponies really exist
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ponygiftart Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I laughed a bit :D
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K4nK4n Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
O... kay...
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